Listen guys I know I said my book is done, and it is, and no I am not announcing a second book, I just wanna make one fact clear. I have spent hours on each chapter and I have tried my hardest to make this story enjoyable so the least you can do is not comment on things like what you think wouldn't happen or that something that I put doesn't exactly show you because I have a broad spectrum of reads and if most of them respond well to something I am not gonna change it because it doesn't suit one person. Use your imagination to fix that faced yourself cause I am sure others have done that too. Like I have said I worked really hard on this book and it's my first book that has made it this far so please just consider that it is not easy to write a book. Please do feel free to comment and correct some of my character mistakes but just consider my feelings before you do it.