Chapter 18 : A Surprise

Rapunzel was going downstairs, when she got to the end of it she met with Michael and he called her.


"Rapunzel dear, can you go to the kitchen and tell Samantha to make some food for Olivia" Michael asked Rapunzel, he was worried about Olivia and she suddenly fainted like this.


"Of course" Rapunzel nodded and headed to the kitchen, she got inside


"Uh, Mr.Michael is asking you to prepare Mrs.Olivia's food" Rapunzel said, Samantha smiled at her.


"Okay honey come and sit" Samantha offered her, Rapunzel smiled at her too and sat, Samantha started preparing the food while Rapunzel was lost in thoughts about what happened today, Mrs.Olivia fainted and then Mr.Jack was this angry, something must have happened, she was snapped out of her thoughts when she saw Samantha holding the plate.


Rapunzel rushed to her and took it, she offered her a smile.


"Please let me take it upstairs to her" Rapunzel offered being the helpful person she always have, Samantha smiled at her kindness, then Rapunzel went upstairs and knocked on Olivia's door then got in.


"Oh honey why didn't you let one of the maids get it for me" Olivia said as Rapunzel walked to her and sat in front of her.


"Its okay I waned to give it to you" Rapunzel replied smiling "how are you now?" She asked.


"I am good thank you" Olivia replied "so when are you going to your sister?" Olivia asked.


"After a little while" Rapunzel replied and Olivia nodded "and...I wanted to say thank you a lot...I couldn't have done it without your help" Rapunzel said thanking her because her sister finally healed.


"Its okay honey no need to, you are thanking me by taking care of yourself" Olivia replied.


"I am not missing anything now but my mother"ย  Rapunzel Exclaimed, Olivia gulped and tensed when she said that, she really feels guilty about keeping her mother in prison but thats the only way she could guarantee that Rapunzel won't run away "didn't the lawyer tell you anything? I mean she was defending herself so shouldn't she get out?" Rapunzel asked furrowing her brows.


"Sweetie you know that we are doing everything we can" Olivia Exclaimed trying to assure her so she wouldn't start to suspect, Rapunzel nodded being the naive girl she is.


During that time Elsa was at a restaurant with Amy telling her everything that happened at the house and how everyone reacted and told her that she is just freaking out.


"Honey I think you made a mistake reacting like this" Amy said, yes Elsa was right but she shouldn't have behaved like this.


"But Amy they could be fooling me!" Elsa Exclaimed.


"And you could be wrong, think about how you'll look if this whole thing is just a misunderstanding" Amy lectured her, she only wanted whats good for her.


"Then what should I do!" Elsa asked pleading for an answer, this whole situation is really stressing and anyone in her place would be like this or maybe worse.


"I think you should hold the stick from its half" Amy pointed out, Elsa furrowed her eyebrows clearly not getting her point "I think you should make up with Jack and Olivia, trust me don't let them stay mad and then you could go to that doctor tomorrow, and tell Jack you are going to this city because you have some work there" Amy advised her.


"You think I should do that?" Elsa asked.


"Of course, in that way you'll be in the safe side, so if you found out you were wrong no one will be mad at you" Amy said, Elsa looked at her and got convinced, Amy was right in everything she said then auddenly her phone ringed, it was Jack, Amy told her to answer so she did.


"J..Jack" Elsa said.


"Elsa! How are you now?" Jack asked, he is really worried about her.


"I am much better now.....Jack I..I am sorry, I know I acted stupid and shouldn't have said these words to your mother


"What the hell are you saying man! What do you mea you are traveling tomorrow?" Kristof asked shocked when Flynn told him that he is going back to his college in England.


"They send me an E-mail about the registration of my subjects or I'll be kicked out" Flynn explained "I am sorry but you all knew from the beginning I didn't come to stay"


"Let them kick you out so what! Its their loss anyways, and why do you want education you are already smart and working in one of the best positions" Kristof Exclaimed.


"But I worked really hard and you know that" Flynn replied, its not like he wants to leave.


"And what about your love? Are you stupid or what? You donated your blood to her sister, this is your chance of getting close to her but you chose to leave" Kristof pointed out.


"I didn't give her my blood I gave her my heart" Flynn Exclaimed, Kristaf slammed the desk and laughed.


"Now this is love!" Kristof Exclaimed excitingly.


"I just wish I could find a good way to tell her goodbye" Flynn sighed, he can't imagine being away from her again.


"I got it!" Kristof shouted "we are all going to go out tonight!"


"Where will we go?" Flynn asked.


"No no, its not where will we go, its who will go?" Kristof smirked, Flynn furrowed his eyebrows still not understanding what he means "Rapunzel is coming!" Kristof Exclaimed.


"What! No way" Flynn said.


"Leave it all to me" Kristof demanded smirking "now get up with me" He said as both of them walked out the office, they entered Jack's office and sat down, Jack narrowed his eyes at them because of the smirk they had.


"Free yourself from anything today, we are going out" Kristof Exclaimed smiling and glancing to Flynn.


"What? Why?" Jack asked confused.


"Flynn is traveling to London tomorrow for his college" Kristof said "so we are making a goodbye celebration tonight"


"So you are going to leave us Flynn" Jack said smiling at Flynn "but yeah, go and look after your education" Jack said, its not like he doesn't want Flynn here but of course he wants him to be more careful about his education.


"What aren't you sad?" Flynn smirked at him.


"Of course I am, The craziest one in the house is leaving how do you think I would be?" Jack joked as they all laughed.


"So we have a night" Kristof smirked.


"Yeah sure, I'll call Elsa and we all could go out" Jack agreed.


Meanwhile Rapunzel was at the hospital with her sister, she was talking with her about how she is now, her sister told her that she'll be out tomorrow.


"We are gonna live together right?" Lilly asked as she was laid in bed resting.


"Yes of course! You know...I am going to see mum" Rapunzel said.


"Really!" Lilly Exclaimed "please tell her I miss her"


"Oh honey, just wait till you get out and I am gonna take you everywhere around here, and we'll go to see mum together" Rapunzel said stroking her hair as Lilly smiled at her, Rapunzel glanced behind her and saw a shopping bad.


"What is this?" Rapunzel asked.


"Its a dress, Mr.Jack is the one who got it and Mark delivered it for me" Lilly replied smiling, Rapunzel furrowed her eyebrows and got up to see whats in the bag, she got the dress out and she was really surprised to see that its the same dress she wated to buy for Lilly today.


"Its really pretty isn't it?" Lilly asked happily "I wanna wear it when I get out"


"Y..yeah Its is" Rapunzel replied "You know..I wanted to buy a dress for you but too bad I didn't find anything...good" Rapunzel said, she didn't want to tell her about the story of this dress.


"So tell me, how is everyone there, I wanna meet them all" Lilly asked.


"They are good and very nice" Rapunzel replied, she knows...most of them are a little demanding precisely 2 but its not like she'll say that to Lilly.


"And Mr.Jack? How is he" Lilly asked, Rapunzel raised her head, she didn't really know how to answer this question.


"He is..you know arrogant, ruthless and serious, he is a businessman after all" Rapunzel replied.


"Really?" Lilly asked shocked a little.


"Well thats what you see" Rapunzel said.


"What do you mean?" Lilly asked confused, Rapunzel smiled at her.


"Thats what you think when you look from far away....but when you get closer, you'll see that his heart is really pure, his smile he has on his face for everyone is very warm and...the way he cares about everyone and remembers details....every small detail" Rapunzel said and was...a little in her own world.


"Looks like he is very nice" Lilly Exclaimed, Rapunzel and nodded at her.


After visiting Lilly Rapunzel went to Jail to see her mother, she was a little nervous to see her, her last encounter with her didn't go well but after all her mother forgave her, minutes later Ava finally came.


She looked at Rapunzel and smiled with tears in her eyes, she felt really guilty about what happened, she rushed and sat in front of her, she wishes their was no glass separating them so she could hold her.


"Mum" Rapunzel whispered and started to cry.


"Oh sweetie I missed you so much" Ava said with tears in her eyes.


"Me too" Rapunzel replied.


"Honey..I..I am so sorry about what I said, I hurt you really bad, that monster named Hans messed with my mind and made me doubt you, please forgive me" Ava apologized feeling really terrible.


"I didn't even get mad from you" Rapunzel said, she doesn't care about her mother said, the only thing she cares about now is that her mother is back to her.


"Don't worry mum, you'll get out of here soon I promise, and we'll live together as a family again" Rapunzel assured her and she is very serious about keeping that promise.


While Jack was driving he called Amy, he wanted to ask her about Elsa, he is really getting worried, after 3 beeps Amy picked up, she was with Hans grocery shopping.


"Hello Jack" Amy said.


"Hey Amy how are you" Jack asked.


"I am great thanks and you?" Amy replied, Hans was watching her carefully focusing on every word.


"Good, look I wanted to ask you about Elsa, why did she go to the doctor?" Jack asked, Amy sighed she knows Jack will know anyway.


"She had pregnancy symptoms, she thought she was pregnant but she wasn't, its just a false pregnancy, the body pretends to be pregnant but actually it isn't" Amy explained to Jack, he sighed no wonder she was freaking out and stressed like this "look Jack you know how Elsa is sensitive when it comes to this so please try to understand her" Amy said, she wanted to make things very good between them till Elsa comes with the results.


"Okay Thanks Amy" and then they hanged up, Amy then called Elsa and told her about the whole call, Elsa sighed and told her she did well, now Jack won't suspect anything.


Anna was taking off Kristof's jacket, he just came back from work and told Anna that Flynn is traveling tomorrow.


"Oh thats a shame, he is the only one who can make us laugh here" Anna joked.


"And did I mention that he is in love" Kristof said and Anna got surprised, Kristof laughed at her reaction and put his hands around her waist "and you know the girl"


"I do?" Anna asked confused.


"Rapunzel" Kristof Exclaimed and Anna got shocked, Flynn likes Rapunzel!


"But don't you think they are not goo for eacother?" Anna asked.


"What do you mean?" Kristof asked.


"I mean..Flynn is a treasure and Rapunel is..well from the country side" Anna Exclaimed.


"She can improve herself besides we are all going out today" Kristof said.


"Really?" Anna asked excited.


"Yes, Flynn is traveling tomorrow so we need a good goodbye and Rapunzel will go too thats why I want you to convince mum and do your magic to Rapunzel" Kristof said smirking, he knows Anna has a talent in fashion and make up.


"Hmmm Sure, I think I know exactly what to do" Anna replied smirking.


"Make her look like a princess so Flynn will faint" Kristof joked and they both laughed, their younger member in the family is in love.


Rapunzel just came back and got inside the house, while walking Emma spotted her and decided to talk to her, after all her best friend (cousin) is in love with her and she wants to be very close to her.


"Rapunzel honey how are you" Emma asked, Rapunzel turned to her.


"I am good Thank you Miss Emma" Rapunzel replied.


"Please just its just Emma" Emma smiled at her "how is your family?" She asked.


"Well my sister she is much better and my mother well...." She sighed, Emma really felt sorry for her.


"Its okay honey everything will get better I feel it" Emma assured her, Rapunzel smiled and nodded at her then excused herself.


"And by the way, if you feel down or anything jut come to me and we could talk about our problems" Emma offered to her.


"Sure" Rapunzel replied and then went upstairs, she felt that Emma is a real nice person, she is the only one here actually who showed her kindness from the first second.


When Rapunzel got inside her room someone knocked and then came in, turned out its Anna.


"And how are you?" Anna asked smiling.


"I am good thanks" Rapunzel replied but got confused to why Anna is here.


"Well then prepare yourself cause tonight we are going out all of us" Anna Exclaimed excitingly, Rapunzel blinked oh no going out and all that is not her at all.


"I..I am sorry but Mrs.Olivia won't agree" Rapunel Exclaimed, she wanted any excuse besides its true that Mrs.Olivia won't agree.


"Uhh don't worry I'll convince her, you just only have to dress good and put some makeup and maybe we could put your hair up too" Anna started speaking.


"N..no I like to stay with out make up" Rapunzel said, she doesn't like to hide her face after all if she is even hiding her face then how could she ask the world to accept if she isn't even accepting herself, thats why she hates make up.


"How could you not put make up, come on its for one night, we are all saying goodbye to Flynn, don't you think it'll be rude not to come even after he donated his blood for your sister" Anna Exclaimed trying to convince her, Rapunzel sighed "don't worry about Olivia I'll convince her" Anna winked at her and then left.


Meanwhile Olivia was downstairs reading a book and thats when Elsa walked in, she must make up with her to be in the safe side, Elsa came and sat in front of her, Olivia glanced at her.


"Mum...Look I know I acted really bad and I shouldn't have said what I said, I am just stressed and really under pressure, I am sorry, I really can't stand you mad at me" Elsa apologized even though she doesn't mean all what she said because she still suspects her, Olivia on the other hand was happy that all of this will end thats why she'll forgive her.


"Its okay honey, I know you are stressed and in situations like this we need to understand that, its fine" Olivia assured her and Elsa smiled, but still she kept thinking that there is something behind especially when she remembered the report thing, she knows she saw her name, she'll find out no matter it takes.


Jack just came back from work, he was sitting out side drinking a cup of tea, it was raining a little and the sun was hidden behind the clouds, Rapunzel then came and Jack told her to sit.


"Mr.Jack can we talk?" She asked


"Yes of course we must talk...Look I don't want you to be sad with me because of this morning, I was really stressed" Jack apologized.


"I am the one who should be apologizing, I was pushing yo" Rapunzel said "Mr.Jack...You bought the dress for Lilly didn't you?" Rapunzel asked.


"Yes I did" Jack replied taking a sip from his tea.


"Lilly liked it a lot thanks" Rapunzel said "Thats why I want to pay its price for you, I might not have the whole amount of money but here" Rapunzel said giving him the money she had, Jack gave her the look which said 'are you kidding me'


"Rapunzel its no big deal its just a small gift for her" Jack said trying to convince her.


"I am sorry but I just can't accept this" She said as she put the money on the table "and I promise on the first salary I'll give you the rest of the price" Rapunzel said.


"I thought we talked about this, I can never allow you to work" Jack said, he doesn't want her he just feels like he is responsible of her now and not just because of the baby.


"But I must, I know you are trying to help but I can never accept anyone to take of me I am sorry" Rapunzel Exclaimed, and she meant every word she said, Jack sighed at how stubborn she is, he doesn't remember meeting a girl this stubborn, all of the girls he knew were always so obeying to him.


"Look I have some work to do now" Jack said standing up and ready to leave.


"Wait! You forgot these" Rapunzel said as she was handing him the money.


"How about you give me the whole price when you get your first salary" Jack winked at her and them left with out taking anything, Rapunzel smiled at how gentle he actually is.


"Oww come on mum, we are all going to celebrate for Flynn, just let her go with us" Anna Exclaimed, Olivia didn't agree at all.


"No means no, I will not let Rapunzel be out in the middle of the night besides she is not one of the family" Olivia Exclaimed.


"But Flynn and her are friends now" Kristof Exclaimed.


"Since when?" Olivia asked shocked.


"Since he donated his blood to her sister" Kristof replied.


"Come on mum she has been in the house for long no wonder she is bored" Anna tried to convince her.


"Olivia, let her go, they are right and its very generous for them to think of her" Michael demanded, and when it came to him Olivia could never say no.


"Fine!, but keep your eyes on her she is not used to these kind of parties" Olivia demanded.


"Don't worry mum, Rapunzel is under my care" Kristof assured her and then winked at Anna.


This is gonna be fun.


AN :


AAAAAND finally its published, this is one of the longest chapters I have ever written and god it tool so many time.


I am sure there is MANY mistakes so please never hesitate to say them to me.


So I only have question


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