Chapter 17 : Observations

Jack was driving back from work, he just called his mother and she told him that they are home now and Rapunzel's sister is now fine but she is gonna stay at the hospital for two days, Jack stopped as the traffic light turned red, he looked at his left and saw a baby's store, he got an idea so he parked his car.


"what are you saying doctor?" Olivia asked, the doctor just called her ad told her about what happened with Elsa and how she asked him about the baby.


"Like I said, Elsa suspects something" The doctor replied, Olivia put her hand on her chest as her heart started beating rapidly "of course I didn't say anything but I can tell she is not gonna stay still"


"Look doctor just don't answer any of her calls and I'll solve this" Olivia hanged up, she is really scared now, if Elsa found out she is gonna tell everyone and that will cause serious trouble.


Jack got back late, he walked to the garden and sat there, he was holding a gift bag, he heard the door slide of the garden being opened and found Rapunzel getting out.


"Rapunzel" He called her, she turned to him "come" he asked, she walked and sat in front of him "how is your sister?" He asked.


"I just talked with her doctor, he said she is fine"ย  she replied.


"I got something for the baby" He said pointing at the gift bag.


"A game?" Rapunzel asked smiling.


"Something like it, you know we put it on top of his bed to make him sleep" Jack explained.


"Yeah I know this game that keeps spinning, I love it" Rapunzel replied.


"Go ahead open it"Jack stated looking at her, Rapunzel got a little surprised by his request but she felt embarrassed.


"N..no I won't open it" she said, after all she is not one of the family and that baby isn't hers to give her the right for this, Jack knew what was she thinking.


"Okay then we'll open it together" He said and went to say beside her, he got out the toy and opened it, Rapunzel smiled at it, she loves kids so much and couldn't wait for the day when she'll have kids of her own.


Meanwhile Amy and Elsa were waiting patiently for a phone call from a doctor, he is a very well known one so Amy decided to send him Elsa's reports to say if its possible for her to be a mother, and finally the phone rang.


"Yes doctor" Amy said "what is your opinion....oh....and....what?....o..okay doctor thanks" Amy hanged up, Elsa was dying in front of her waiting to talk, she still has hope.


"Talk Amy what is it" Elsa yelled a little getting really nervous, its not like she an impatient person but this situation is totally an exception.


"He said that you can't get pregnant ever" Amy replied honestly, Elsa wasn't surprised by that she got used to it but still it hurts but thats not the main answer she wants.


"And the surrogate mother?" Elsa asked breathing hard.


"He said that also your eggs are very weak and can't be used in the implantation process" Amy replied sadly, Elsa's eyes widened.


"But there is a baby in this whole thing! How come!" Elsa started yelling asking herself this, she is going crazy now "If its not my eggs then whose!? Where did they get the eggs" Elsa now is breaking down and many years is getting out of her eyes, the thought of a woman having a baby from Jack is killing her, another woman is the mother of his son, how can she live with this?


"This is it! From tomorrow morning I'll drive all the way to the city where we did the implantation there, there is a secret behind this and I'll reveal it" Elsa yelled with blood shot eyes like she is ready to make a murder.


The next morning Jack was making his tie as he was getting ready for work, the door knocked and his mother entered.


"Jack honey, Elsa didn't sleep here tonight, is there any problems between you?" Olivia asked, she wasn't that worried about Elsa but worried if she came and told Jack anything.


"Mum its fine, she stayed at Amy's" Jack assured her.


"So you didn't fight or anything?" Olivia asked again just to make sure.


"Mum why are you so worried?" Jack asked confused, he can feel that his mother is acting weird.


"N..nothing, I am just making sure that you are okay" Olivia Exclaimed.


"Don't worry we are" Jack assured her, he opened the door and got out, Rapunzel went out of her room and they met right on the top of the stairway.


"Good morning" Rapunzel greeted "Uh Mrs.Olivia, you know..my sister is at the hospital and I wanted to ask you if I can to the..mall to buy her something" Rapunzel asked.


"Dear you know I wouldn't mind but after what happened lately with you I don't think its sa-" Olivia couldn't finish as Jack interrupted.


"Its okay Mum, she can go with Mark" Jack Stated.


"and..I haven't seen my mother in so long so I wanna ask if I can visit her soon" Rapunzel asked, she is not the type to ask for many things but she has the right to ask this, they can't control her every move.


"Okay, I'll talk with the lawyer soon" Jack smiled at her and then left.


"Mrs.Olivia" Rapunzel whispered "When come here how am I gonna explain the pregnancy thing?"


"of course you won't tell her" Olivia whispered back.


"But what am I gonna say when my stomach begins to grow" Rapunzel asked.


"We'll see when the time comes" Olivia then walked away, Rapunzel got nervous and kept thinking about when the time comes, if her family found out they won't understand and will be disappointed.


Elsa was driving madly to the house, she will not back away till she gets the end of all this 'there is a secret going on, they all must know except for me' she reached the house and her main place is Olivia's room, she got upstairs and opened the door of her room, Olivia got shocked when she saw her.


"Mum!" Elsa said as she got in, Olivia looked at her and tried to hide the fear in her eyes "Tell me mum what is it the you are hiding from me" Elsa asked


"what do you mean?" Olivia asked.


"The baby inside Rapunzel's stomach, who is his mother" Elsa asked more directly, Olivia gasped but tried to hide that.


"Talk well, know your limits when you are talking to me" Olivia pointed at her yelling.


"I asked you one question, who is the mother" Elsa yelled, she is really losing it and can't handle this, Jack is having a baby from another woman and that's too much for anyone to handle, at this moment Jack opened the door and got in.


"May I know whats going on here, your yelling is very loud" Jack asked confused.


"n..nothing, your wife is just a little stressed" Olivia replied.


"WHO SAID I M STRESSED, I am only asking you to answer my only question" Elsa yelled much louder, Jack furrowed his eye brows.


"and what is this question?" Jack asked, Elsa turned to him, she will not stay silent and everyone must know.


"Who is the mother of the baby" Elsa asked, Olivia gasped and Jack frowned at this.


"Elsa what are you saying, I don't know where is this coming from" Olivia yelled.


"wait wait" Jack said "What is happening here?" Jack asked.


"The eggs were taken from another mother, Your mother knows something and she doesn't want to tell me" Elsa Exclaimed, Jack got really confused, he turned to his mother "I went to the doctor and she said I can never be a mother" Elsa looked at Olivia "Not even with the surrogate mother way"


"Mum?" Jack asked.


"Honey we went there together and you know that the baby is from both of you, I don't know what has changed from there and now" Olivia said innocently trying to fool them with any way.


"You heard her Elsa" Jack said, that's his mother and she wouldn't do that, Elsa's eyes widened, he doesn't believe her! so that leads to one observation.


"so its was a plan between both of you" Elsa cried and her eyes started to water, Jack couldn't believe what she is saying.


"Elsa you are crossing your limits" Jack said with blood shot eyes.


"Both of you decided to fool me and hid this from me" Elsa whispered.


"Elsa we are not hiding anything and don't forget that YOU are the one who asked for this" Jack shouted getting really pissed.


"You two! both of you know the truth and you don't want to tell me" Elsa cried and got out of the room, she ran to her car and Jack started to follow her, she got in her car and started to drive.


"ELSA ELSA" Jack kept calling her, he ran to his car and started to follow her, he got out his phoe and called her but she kept cancelling all his calls, Jack saw Elsa speeding up and driving very madly, A dejavu came to his mind and that was it, he speeded up very fast and passed her till he stopped the car in front of her, Both of them got out and walked to eachother.


"DO YOU WANNA US TO MAKE THE SAME ACCIDENT AGAIN" Jack yelled getting furious of how she is acting.


"Jack! The doctor said I cannot be a mother" Elsa repeated her words again.


"Elsa both of us were there, your doctor must e wrong, the implantation went well and the baby is ours" Jack tried to assure her but its like she keeps on building walls "Elsa honey please there isn't anything that we are hiding" Jack tried to hold her but she backed away.


"NO" She yelled "why can't you believe me? why can't you understand me?" Elsa cried "Leave me alone" Elsa yelled, she got into her car and left, Jack couldn't understand where is this all coming from, Elsa has changed much.


He wanted to break all the walls she is building but it seems like the more he breaks the more she builds, he is really confused now so he went back to the house.


He was sitting with his mother now in her room talking a little about everything that happened and how Elsa has reacted.


"What made her think this and believe in this so much" Jack asked, Guilt was killing Olivia second by second and she didn't know what to do but she knows that this must stay a secret.


"I have no idea son everything happened in front of you" Olivia replied, Jack looked at her and laid his elbows on his legs then put his hands on his chin and sighed.


"Elsa..she is...the mother of the baby..righ?" Jack asked as he looked at Olivia "I mean nothing happened there, there isn't anything that I don't know?" Jack said as he looked at his mother, Olivia wanted this to end and the fear inside of her mixed with guilt which made it so hard on her.


"Son I am tired of your questions" she said as her eyes started to water "your wife came and asked me to do this and I arranged everything and after all that...you are doing this to me, I.." Olivia couldn't finish because she actually started to faint, Jack stood up and ran to his mother.


"Mum! MUM" Jack screamed as he got worried "EMMA, ANNA" Jack called them out loud, they came running with Amelia also with them.


"What happened?" Emma asked getting worried as Jack laid his mother on bed.


"Is it possible for blood pressure to just get this low suddenly" Anna asked worriedly, Jack just sat there as he watched them trying to wake his mother, this is all getting so frustrating, he believes his mother but a part of him was a little worried about Elsa and all this.


Meanwhile Rapunzel was at the mall looking at many dresses in a shop as Mark was standing guarding her, she has been in many shops but couldn't find a good thing or a thing that she can actually afford, she saw a very beautiful dress that she really liked and wanted to get for her sister but when she looked at the price tagged she got shocked and sighed, Mark seemed to notice her problem so he walked to her.


"If you want anything just tell me and I'll help you" Mark offered nicely, Rapunzel smiled at him, she knows he is trying to help but she can never accept anyone to spend money on her.


"Thank you Uncle Mark" She replied politely " everything here is very expensive" Rapunzel said.


"Well this is life in the city, things here are much more expensive not like the country side" Mark stated, they walked together outside.


"But I can't live like this, after this whole thing ends how am I and my family gonna live? I must find a Job" Rapunzel Exclaimed.


"But Mr.Jack will never allow it besides I know he won't leave you and your family alone" Mark assured her.


"I can never accept anything from him, no I won't allow anyone to take care of me" Rapunzel stated, Mark rolled his eyes at her stubbornness.


They both got inside the car and left, Rapunzel kept thinking about what she'll do, after this whole thing ends, she can't go back to the country side. Hans won't leave her alone, and she can't stay here without a job or her family will suffer.


They reached home and when Rapunzel got out of the car she saw Jack coming, He was heading to work and going to his car.


"Mr.Jack" Rapunzel called as she went to him.


"Rapunzel not now" Jack said, he didn't want to listen to anything right now he has enough already going on in his mind.


"Wait no! Its really important...I need to start working" Rapunzel said, Jack stopped and frowned at her "Mr.Jack life here is not easy and I am not gonna stay here forever" Rapunzel said.


"Rapunzel no one said you'll be alone" Jack said and was about to leave again but she stopped him.


"Do you know that I was trying to buy a gift for my sister today but couldn't" Rapunzel Exclaimed, they must understand her situation.


"If you want anything just tell them and they'll get it" Jack said and walked but Rapunzel grabbed his arm.


"I didn't ask you for money" Rapunzel stated, she is not one of these people.


"Rapunzel not your time, not your time at all!" Jack said and left, he really wasn't in the best mood now, Rapunzel scoffed, of course what did she expect from rich people, she sighed and went inside.


AN :


PHEW! Finally written and done, I don't know If I am gonna update sooner but I'll try.


Anyways what do you think of this chapter?


What about Elsa, whats gonna happen with her? And Rapunzel? What would she do? And whats gonna happen with Jack?ย 


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