Oh my gosh, 19 votes??? I didn't think people would like my story this much! My other fanfiction is longer with more views and I don't even have very many comments.

So thank you all so much for the votes and suggestions! All of you have amazing ideas and suggestions, I wish I could use them all. But i'm also just starting on my work as a fanfiction writer, and I need some tips.

If you have any tips for how I could improve my writing, please let me know.

Thank you!

Back to the story!