Dekha ek khawaab rewritten

so long ago i used to watch this show called dekha ek khawaab. it had so much potential and scope for character development but the writers didn't do justice to the story line as a lot of characters remained underused and the main couple never got the required focus.

so i am rewriting the show from the middle from where i think it started to go south.


the story begin after episode 75 where komal takes manyata to meet akash and asks her to run away with him but she refuses.
the difference here is that she doesn't go to the office akash interviews in but instead in the chawl.
there is no problem with the jon as akash has got a good job without anyone's influence and does not come to fight with moniya.

I think after this episode in the show manyata and uday's relationship started to become toxic where manyata was utterly selfis and naive, only went to him when she needed something and always ended up hurting him. also she ended up repeating the same mistaked which made the show go in circles.

in my fanfiction uday and manyata are still friends and they are bonding very well. manyata's princess training is still going on under vijay's supervision and she is starting to bond with each and every member of the family. brijraj is still angry at her because of all the akash fiasco and jay is still a bitch.

there is a lot of room for character development for manyata's characters which was not shown to us in the show as it ended midway and she remained the same confused maiden she was in the beginning. but i want to show how she can grow into a efficient Yuvrani of devgarh and a successful businesswoman.

i didn't want to just remove akash because i don't want manyata to choose uday just because she doesn't have aby other option. i want her to choose him over everyone else.

in short i want uday to sweep manyata away from under akash's nose.(evil smirk)

so let me know how do you like the plot and whether or not i should continue the story.