A fox and his vixens

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Harry Potter is dead. In the aftermath of the war, in order to strengthen the might of the magical world, Voldemort enacts a repopulation effort. Hermione Granger has an order secret, lost but hidden in her min, so she is send as an enslaved surrogate to the High Reeve until her mind can be cracked.Illustrated by Avendell

|Book 1 of The Betrayal Trilogy - Now Discontinued|[READ AT YOUR OWN RISK-STORY WROTE AT AGE OF 13]***"N--No! Leave her alone! Please, leave her alone," I say weakly, "she has nothing to do with this!""That is where you are wrong, Melanie," he replies. I can actually hear the smile in his voice as he continues to speak. "You see, she is meddling in business that isn't hers to meddle in, and I told you that there would be punishment if you went to the police. Now, I must go. Laura requires my very special attention at the moment."A girl's scream rips through the receiver; Laura's. Before I can yell for him to stop, the line clicks.•••When Melanie Larkin's best friend is murdered by Melanie's stalker, her and her mother flee to a new town where the FBI and police keep a watchful eye over them. The only problem is, Melanie's stalker knows where she has gone. How does Melanie know this?He leaves a white rose in her room every night while she's asleep.•••#2 in Horror on August 1st 2015Published on March 27th 2015

Shri Krishna is the protector of all of his devotees, and destroyer of those who hurt his people. Krishn killed Narakasur, who had 16100 princesses kept as slaves. But what if there was another girl who was more traumatized at her young age? Cursed and sent to Kaliyuga as a baby, she grew up to the age of 16 there, before traveling back to Dwaparyuga.Ruhi Desai, a girl who trusted Krishna more than herself and loved him with all her heart, realizes that she was married to Krishna in Dwaparyuga. ~~~~~"Aap kya keh rahe hai Maharishi? Main aur unki bharya?" Ruhi asked as she wasn't able to process the words said by Rishi Durvasa. "Yahi satya hai putri. Tum Dwarikadhish Shri Krishn ki bharya ho," Rishi Durvasa explained everything again to her. "Hey Prabhu hey harinaam Krishn jagganatham premanandi Yeh kya hua?!" the words left her mouth on there own accord, and she stood there. dumbfounded. "Krishn hi tumhare Arya hai putri," Maharishi smiled and left laughing from there. "Mumma kaha atak gayi main. Kanha mere Arya?!" Ruhi's cheeks turned pink as her wish had come true, but how will she face him?

Machine Translation.Not My StoryFor Offline PurposeAlternative Title: 末世：反派她总在装圣母Author: 雏雏菊The Virgin Mary system dug out a delicate girl, Chi Ying, from the game world as its host.Looking at her pure face, it secretly affirmed in its heart that this pure appearance simply best suited the Virgin Mary character!After binding, it discovered that the delicate flower was in fact the villainess boss of the game!The system was faintly worried: Yes, it should be fine, right?The system saw Chi Ying standing in a pool of blood, with the light of the Virgin Mary above her head, holding a zombie's head and weeping.She burst into tears, "God, they are so pitiful."Everyone: Is this person sick?Seeing the ever-increasing Virgin Mary value, the system covered its eyes.Don't think I didn't see it! Weren't that bunch of zombie heads all cut off by her?!Gu Chi picked out a woman from the pile of zombies, with tears in her eyes and blood all over her body.He reasonably suspected that she was a dangerous person who had been infected, so he tied her up, and put the gun against her eyebrows, waiting for her to mutate at any time.The woman he pointed the gun at suddenly turned her head, which seemed to be a sign of mutation. Gu Chi looked resolute, and was about to shoot when he saw her looking at him lovingly, she said, "You are so ruthless, you must have been hurt in the past... It's okay, I don't blame you."Gu Chi shook his hand."..."Thank you for the invitation, but he didn't get hurt before.

The story is based on historical fiction. If you are into enemies to lovers kind of story then this is the one for you.King Aditya is a cruel, fearless, and a warrior. He is the new king of Rudragarh and the words have spread all around the region of his cruelty and heartlessness. He is planning to rule all over the world. He thinks he has no weakness. He fears no man, he prays to no God and he doesn't have a heart so he doesn't love anyone but power. He is in a conquest to rule the world and kill his enemies. But little did he know that soon his life is going to take a turn and he is going to face something he never imagined he would ever face. This is a story of love and revenge. This is not your story. This is not my story. This is Avantika and Aditya's story and together they are going to change their destiny

Sara also know as Sarafina De Luca was born in the family in the Mafia world.What will happen if the parents give her up at the age of 2 for her own safety?Will she survive?What happens when she finds out she has five older brothers after 14 years of her life? Will she be the cute, innocent girl they once knew? What will happen when secrets will reveal and mystery will be solved!?