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#HowToAuthor: Drafting & Revision
Advice for writing book-shaped things and getting them traditionally published. This series will cover everything from querying to agent fit, to building a platform and marketing yourself.
FEAR── eddie kaspbrak
UNDER EDITING❝𝐇𝐞𝐥𝐩 𝐇𝐞𝐥𝐩 𝐬𝐡𝐞𝐬 𝐧𝐨𝐭 𝐛𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠❞[𝚌𝚘𝚖𝚙𝚕𝚎𝚝𝚎𝚍]𝘝𝘦𝘳𝘰𝘯𝘪𝘤𝘢 𝘩𝘰𝘥𝘨𝘦𝘴, 𝘢 𝘱𝘰𝘱𝘶𝘭𝘢𝘳 𝘨𝘪𝘳𝘭 𝘪𝘯 𝘴𝘤𝘩𝘰𝘰𝘭 𝘸𝘩𝘰 𝘫𝘶𝘴𝘵 𝘴𝘰 𝘩𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘯𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘦 𝘥𝘢𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘏𝘦𝘯𝘳𝘺 𝘣𝘰𝘸𝘦𝘳𝘴, 𝘧𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘴 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘰𝘯𝘦 𝘢 𝘭𝘪𝘵𝘵𝘭𝘦 𝘮𝘰𝘳𝘦 𝘚𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘯𝘨𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘯 𝘩𝘦𝘳𝗲𝗱𝗱𝗶𝗲 𝗸𝗮𝘀𝗽𝗯𝗿𝗮𝗸 𝘅 𝗼𝗰 𝙸𝚝 𝟸𝟶𝟷𝟽#2 in pennywise |© 𝟐𝟎𝟏𝟕| 𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐢𝐪𝐮𝐞𝐛𝐥𝐲𝐭𝐡𝐞
Thirty Years
Images flashed through her line of vision without stopping. For 30 years she lived for him. She gave up her family, her own dreams, and herself to be with him. . . . Via Dos spent most of her life chasing after a man who never loved her. Once given a second chance, Via sets out to correct her mistakes. In the process, she reconnects with her family, pursues her dream career, and finds a love she never knew she would have.. . . As of July 20, 2019#1 coding#1 projectacceptyou#1 defying#2 youth#2 firststory#4 secondchance#7 guilt#8 tragedy#9 truth. . . *Cover design belongs to me* Cover art does NOT belong to me (will be taken down upon request)*This is an original work. Do NOT copy or take any part of my work without permission.. . . This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, organizations, places, events, and incidents are either products of the author's imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
The Writer's Gradebook | Closed For Requests
*HARSH REVIEWER WARNING!*We all know how Wattpad can be. Jaw-droppingly beautiful stories get less than a thousand reads while flaming piles of garbage riddled with cliches and contrivances that barely pass for plot reach into the millions and shoot to the top of the hotlists, courtesy of the mysterious and elusive algorithm no one can crack. Some days it seems like Wattpad's "algorithm" has a weird fetish for awful grammar and bland, overused tropes.But fear not, brave readers! For we here at akaprocrastiNATION are prepared to voyage into the murky depths of this vast site and return with wisdom for you. The ultimate knowledge: which books are worth reading and which should be preceded with utmost caution. Gear up for a wild ride. There will be underrated gems... and horrific literature nightmares.Disclaimer: The Gradebook contains the unabashed opinions of its host reviewers. Our opinions do not necessarily reflect objective fact, although we will back all judgment with as much evidence as possible. If wandering readers happen to be offended or find distaste with anything we have said, we plead "opinionated rando on the internet" and do not claim responsibility for emotional damage.[Reviews, Recommendations & Writing Advice]
Willy Wonka One-Shots
these will be based on the 2023 movie Wonka, not catcf basically I watched wonka and im now obsessedmost of these will be angsty and/or fluffyYou can request (please do, i have next to no motivation on a good day anymore)
Merry Dennor Christmas!
Lukas comes from a torn family. His brother was transferred to Hong Kong, and Lukas to a school in America. When he meets a strange man, Matthias Køhler, who has a mysterious background, he must find out what is so special about this stranger...I love Dennor, and I really hope you enjoy this Christmastime tale, and have many mixed emotions. Comments, critiques, and votes are much appreciated!Jeg elsker dig! Matthias
UNLIKELY ALLIES
Haseena's ordinary day takes a wild turn when she stumbles into a mysterious box at home, landing in a strange new world where she's not exactly welcomed. Luckily, she meets Kax19(Karishma), who becomes her rock and best friend in this topsy-turvy universe. 📖 I invite you to be more than just a silent reader. Your feedback, thoughts, and critiques are valuable to me.Started on✨: 16 may, 2024
𝐌𝐘𝐒𝐓𝐈𝐐𝐔𝐄 ೃ⁀➷ 𝗵𝗮𝗷𝗶𝗺𝗲 𝗶.
❝𝙍𝙀𝙈𝙀𝙈𝘽𝙀𝙍 𝙊𝙐𝙍 𝙋𝙍𝙊𝙈𝙄𝙎𝙀?❞𝗦𝗧𝗢𝗡𝗘 cold was the star ace of the Aoba Johsai volleyball team. One would rarely see a smile or any hint of emotion, other than irritation, come upon his tan face. So when he was forced to buy his counterpart, the fluffy haired setter of the team, a loaf of milk bread, the boy wasn't expecting to run into an old childhood friend of his.And at that very moment, he didn't think she would turn out to be the girl of his dreams.────── ･ ｡ﾟ☆: *.☽ .* :☆ﾟ. ──────𝐒𝐓𝐀𝐑𝐓𝐄𝐃 - 12/24/2020𝐅𝐈𝐍𝐈𝐒𝐇𝐄𝐃 - 05/25/2021𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐊𝐈𝐍𝐆𝐒 - → #hajime - 1 → #iwaizumihajime - 1 → #milkbread - 1 → #animeromance - 1 → #tooruoikawa - 1 → #tooru - 1 → #hq - 2 → #seijoh - 2 → #volleyballclub - 2 → #aobajohsai - 3 → #hqfanfic - 3 → #hajimeiwaizumi - 4────── ･ ｡ﾟ☆: *.☽ .* :☆ﾟ. ──────➽ I do not own the HAIKYŪ!! franchise! All of the characters and the plot of HAIKYŪ!! rightfully belong to Haruichi Furudate.➽ None of these events described in this book are real. This is a HAIKYŪ!! fanfiction!
Free Critique & Advice
Looking for someone to review you story? I'm here to help! Back in 2011, I used to critique peoples' stories, and really enjoyed doing so. It was fun to contribute to the community, read books, and give authors a fresh perspective. Fast forward to today in 2021, a whole decade later, and I've been considering pursuing a career in editing! I'd like to get back in the groove and get some practice in, so if you'd like me to read your book and give you some feedback on your work, drop a comment. See "Submission Guidelines" for details.
Boyfriend's Demon Maid Book 2 (BF x GF)
I thought my first fanfiction of this AU would be the last of it, but a part 2 was requested by a reader, and I couldn't refuse. It's actually convenient that Miss Kobayashi's Dragon Maid got a new season, too, so enjoy more scenarios of Boyfriend and his Demon lady friend!
10 Traps To Avoid As A New Author ✔️
Discover some of the writing tips from Wattpad Star and formerly featured author of 'Trapped'.I have completed my share of beta reads and critiques for new authors on and off Wattpad and many of the points I have noted are often repeats - something that I used to find in my own writing as well, but have stopped (or tried to stop) over the years. It's hard starting out, but it's even harder when no one points out your mistakes. I hope you will find this guide useful to detect some of those problem areas and pick up tips on how to avoid common mistakes. Writing is an art and takes practice. There is no corner cutting - you can only improve if you keep at it.Interested? Well, then let's explore some of the common traps I've seen...
The flash's sister
My name is Bethany Nora Allen. When I was 6 weeks old my mother was murderd by a man in yellow lighting. Even though he killed my mum my dad got sent to jail for her death. I live with my adoptive father Joe, his daughter Iris and the best person in the world my older brother Barry. One night we were in his lab. The star labs particle accelerator exploded and me and Barry were hit by lightning. Now we both have super speed and we are a crime fighting duo and with the help from our friends at star labs The Flash & The Streak will help save our city.
![Harry Hook X Reader [Requests closed]](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/219459178.jpg "Harry Hook X Reader [Requests closed]")
Harry Hook X Reader [Requests closed]
Harry Hook X Reader OneshotsMaking my own Harry Hook Imagines! Open for requests. You can put them in the comment section or send it to my inbox. Have fun reading!
Moi,Maçon!
Experience d'une vie dans la plus célèbre des loges du monde afin de mériter sa place!
Rants: The Things That Piss Me Off On Wattpad
Just things that peeve me off here on Wattpad and things in general. Instead of filling my tip book with rants, I'll put them here so they don't clutter up space I could be putting writing advice. Note: If you're easily offended, don't read.
Writing Tips to Help Write Stories People Will Love
tips to help you become a more successful writer. Some of these are ones I've gotten from a youtuber, Jenna Moreci. If you ever want to, check out her stuff cause she is a full time writer and very good when it comes to writing tips.
Edit like an Editor: A Wattpad Featured Guide ✔
*A WATTPAD FEATURED GUIDE**Highest Ranking #5 in Non-Fiction's HOT List**Ranked #1 in #how-to, #1 in #editor, #1 in #publishing, and #1 in #grammar*• Do you find yourself with too many typos?• Do grammar and spelling tools not always find your slip-ups?• Is English grammar just not your thing?• Are you a victim of writer's block?• Do your characters' personalities fall flat?• Is your dialogue boring?• Do you need help staying consistent with your points-of-view?• Are you struggling with choosing the best genre for your work?• Have you finished your first draft and don't know where to go from there?• Are you in the bulk of your revising stage and could use some guidance?jgfairytales has compiled this guidebook together through her experience as an editorial freelancer and Wattpad editor and critic. She knows what the Wattpad writer struggles with. She wants to help you learn how to avoid those slip-ups again, and she does so with easy-to-understand writing.Learn how to edit your work like an editor through these chapters full of detailed explanations, examples, guides, tips, and practice questions from yours truly.After reading this guidebook, you will walk away with an understanding of (American) English grammar and the confidence to comfortably edit your own work.The end goal for every writer is, of course, publication. jgfairytales even has a few tips for you to reach that goal and how to stay on track.jgfairytales has grown as an editor and critic from college courses, textbooks, guidebooks, editing and critiquing others' work, and editing her work. All references used will be cited, so you may also refer to them if you wish to.Copyright: All Rights Reserved by Jennifer Gioia © 2016-2018However, where credit is given, the copyright is (CC) Attribution-ShareAlike.
𝐈𝐍𝐍𝐎𝐂𝐄𝐍𝐓 𝐋𝐎𝐓𝐔𝐒 𝐅𝐋𝐎𝐖𝐄𝐑 ➤ 𝐠𝐫𝐚𝐩𝐡𝐢𝐜 𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐩 ;𝐜𝐥𝐨𝐬𝐞𝐝
"innocent lotus flower"𝗀𝗋𝖺𝗉𝗁𝗂𝖼 shop 2023𝖽𝗈 𝗇𝗈𝗍 𝖼𝗈𝗉𝗒 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗂𝖽𝖾𝖺𝗌 𝗈𝗋 𝖽𝖾𝗌𝗂𝗀𝗇. 𝖼𝗋𝖾𝖽𝗂𝗍𝗌 𝗍𝗈 𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗋𝗈𝗌𝗈𝗎𝗋𝗌 𝗐𝗁𝗂𝖼𝗁 𝗁𝖺𝗌 𝖻𝖾𝖾𝗇 𝗎𝗌𝖾𝖽.𝗇𝗈𝗇 𝖼𝗈𝗉𝗂𝖺𝗍𝖾 𝗅𝖾 𝗂𝖽𝖾𝖾 𝗈 𝗂𝗅 𝖽𝖾𝗌𝗂𝗀𝗇. 𝖼𝗋𝖾𝖽𝗂𝗍𝗂 𝖺 𝗍𝗎𝗍𝗍𝖾 𝗅𝖾 𝗋𝗂𝗌𝗈𝗋𝗌𝖾 𝖼𝗁𝖾 𝗌𝗈𝗇𝗈 𝗌𝗍𝖺𝗍𝖾 𝗎𝗍𝗂𝗅𝗂𝗓𝗓𝖺𝗍𝖾.
Comments and Critiques: A Wattpad Workshop
A book containing all the important details for CCWW book club!Including:-The Membership Form-Mod and Admin info-Critiquing stipulations-Club Rules| Highest Rankings |#34 on Critiquing#62 on Feedbacks#24 on Workshops
! Inquisitormaster Oneshots !
< Inquisitonmaster Oneshots 3Please read "Info // Request" before requesting anything and please only request on that page!Rewriting a lot of stories in here! XPI do not own any characters in this, they all belong to Inquisitormaster (http://bit.ly/InquisitorMaster)!Book cover creds: @klem_flower_ on Instagram
Terrible Writing Advice // Wattpad Anime "critique"
Here you'll learn how to become a master of the art of writing fanfiction. These tutorials are 100% approved by the Herd mentality that poisons this platform. Rest assured! I guarantee you'll become one of the most esteemed writers around here, with ideas never seen before...well... except the other few hundreds that do the same stuff. BOTTOM LINE! Follow this guide and you too can become the most bland and unoriginal guy on Wattpad. You're welcome!Disclaimer:SARCASM in pula mea! Do not take this seriously!And yes, I'm making a parody after a channel of the same name on YouTube.
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♛♛ bungou stray dogs oneshots ♛♛♡♡ feel free to request ♡♡✩✩ i apologise if theyre ooc ✩✩ ✎✐ art is not mine ✎✐ ⋆⋆ please enjoy/feel free to critique ⋆⋆