Sorry this update is late! I was sick last night, just so you know. Don't worry, I know it isn't Wednesday.

This is a Mary Sue I found just last night on Wattpad. She's in a RolePlay called "Criminal RP". This is one of the worst characters I've ever seen, and I'm really excited to show her to you, so I'm not alone in my pain. This is one of the worst Mary Sues I have ever seen.

WARNING: For your own safety, I recommend you wear proper eye protection while reading the content below.

Anything I say is in bold.
Anything the creator says is in italics.
Anything else will be in regular text.

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Here is my form!

Name: Miniza DarkFeather But is called Miniza The Killer

Wait.. so just Jeff the Killer.. except it's a girl? This isn't creepypasta roleplay, it's one about CRIMINALS.

Age: 1600 (looks 16)

This is so generic and overused, you've literally created a bad OC by using three words.

Gender: Female

Species: Shapeshifter

Yeah.. logical..
I'm not saying all shapeshifter characters are bad, but Miniza the Killer is overpowered and just overall a crappy character.

Appearance:

Okay, so she included the link to her DeviantArt, and this is pure GOLD.

And after I did a little extra research, I found these beauties:

Okay, I don't really think I need to get into why this is horrible, but if this is worth doing, it's worth overdoing.

First- The hair. Those colors don't work together at all, it's an eyesore. And if she spends the time to dye her hair, it really takes away the "killer" mood. If that thing came into my barber shop, I would call the police and start crying on the floor.

Score: 0

Second, her body. For one, the.. sorry to say this.. but her bust is totally and completely way too large and unrealistic. Also her waist is thinner than the average human neck, and of course, she has mismatched eyes, one of which is YELLOW, which NOT a natural eye color.

Score: 0

Lastly, what the heck is up with the different designs? So first the cancerous shade of blue in her hair changes, then it's all red and black, suddenly she has fox ears and a tail, then her mouth is partly stitched shut.

Please choose one of these explosively repulsive designs.

Total score: -6

..Proceed?

Personality: Mineza was bullied when she was little but she killed the bullies when she was in the forest alone.

That's not a personality. Being bullied and being a murderer aren't personality traits. And this is just a female Jeff The Killer downgrade. This is almost as bad as the new Rodrick.

#NotMyJeff

Miniza is very powerful and beautiful.

Person: Describe your personality.
Miniza: I'm powerful and beautiful.

She is brave. When she was 1590, she went to slenders mansion and met Jeff The Killer. Jeff loved her ever since they met.

They are now dating and Slendy is jealous,

but Miniza enjoys being with Jeff and Slendy wants her to be happy.

Well that describes her personality very well.

*sarcasm*
And why is Slenderman always some cuddly, fluffy lil teddy bear? He kills people. He's not your boyfriend. Along with Jeff.

Good things about them: she is compashunat and loving.

I think you mean 'compassionate', and if she was, why is she a killer?

Flaws: She can be clumsy and sometimes she is sarcastic.

Wait- are those- are those supposed to be flaws?

Crimes they committed: Murder

Oh, that clears up a lot! We thought she was called Miniza the Killer because she stole somebody's tortilla in 4th grade!

Weapon: A knife

That's totally original.

Other: Slenderman loves her but he is like a brother to her.

If this doesn't scream "Mary Sue" I don't know what does.

Hope you like her!

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Well, that wraps up our interesting encounter with Miniza The Killer.. Don't forget to vote and add to your library for new Sues weekly! Thanks for reading!

If you ever find any Mary Sues, don't forget to PM me a link! (Or if you have any bleach I can borrow.)

I'm outta here.