Fanfic Review: Skips A Beat

Type Of Story: 5SOS


Author: MoganNyguel


Story Rating Estimation: R (sensitive topics)


Reads: 4K


Votes: 352


Comments: 214


Description: "So this is life. Moving on with or without you."


<Story takes place in Virginia, United States>


Suggested If: you like stORIES THAT WILL RIP OUT YOUR HEART


My Review: I'll be honest, I predicted most of the ending chapters within the first like, 3 chapters. BUT I absolutely love the plot oh my god I just. I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into it, especially looking up the symptoms and things of Michael's disease. I just. I love the plot so much. Plus it made me feel so many different emotions, both happy and sad, and that's definitely a sign of a damn good writer. I like your chapter lengths too and your grammar and spelling is pretty damn near perfect. There were a few mistakes (mostly your/you're mixups), but overall the grammar and spelling is pretty damn good. This is actually probably one of the best fics I've read in awhile. Overall, yOU RIPPED MY FUCKING HEART OUT.


Note to Author: You are an evil, evil person


Rating (1-5): fIVE DAMNIT GO READ THIS STORY


Other Note: You like Buddy Holly, which makes me want to like you


But I actually hate you, just a little bit


wHY

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