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Disclaimer: this book is for entertainment and not for judgmental people if you do not like my book that is OK I'm not saying you have to love my book. All of your hate comments are not needed I have got a lot of hate messages saying how bad my book was I do not really care if you don't like my book I tried my best and that's all that matters. Thank you. This is not a book it's just a really short paragraph little story I will be creating a part two of this.


Maddie and her friends' lucky day!
There were 2 girls, both in grade 6, they were named Maddie and Iren. Maddie had long,soft, silky dirty blonde hair that was almost down to her waist! She also has  hazel eyes that glow in the light! Everyone calls her the golden girl! She also has deep dimples. She was a very beautiful girl, Iren was her best friend, she had blonde hair and blue eyes and she was also very beautiful! They hung out almost all the time! "Maddie wake up" Iren shouted "No it's too early" Maddie said while stuffing her face in her pillow Iren hollerd "Victoria is coming with a bunch of our friends!" "Ugh k fine" Maddie said with an attitude "Hello? anyone here?" Victoria said "yes hello Maddie and I are here!" Iren shouted. Victoria said "ok"  "guys i need to go to the store, anyone want to come?" Iren explained "Sure!" Said Victoria,Lauren and Carys. When they all left Maddie was all alone with her pet dog named Barkley! Barkley had brown curly fur and the right eye was blue and the left eye was brown! Then a weird, creepy man named Disco came up to Maddie's door and said "Hey there mate" "ummm hi?" Maddie said with a mumble. Dico hollerd " want some free tickets to hawaii for you and four of your friends not including you?!" " ummmm sure?" Maddie said while she was very confused. " Thanks, I guess" Maddie yelled. One hour later the other girls came home from shopping. Carys said "what are these tickets here on the table? Are you going to a concert WITHOUT us?!?!"  " oh no, no, no, a random man named Disco came and gave them to me for free! He used to go to our school! I know I'm not gonna win but whatever it's worth a try." So Maddie scratched all 3 tickets and the first one......  she didn't win, second one...... "I won!" Maddie beamed "wait really?!?" All the other's  said. Then she wanted to only invite 3 friends, it was a really hard decision but she's gonna bring  Carys,Iren and Lauren. "Sorry to everyone I could not bring, I know I can bring more but it's ok!" Maddie said, They all can come so they all met on the plane. Maddie paid for V.I.P seating. "OMG this is the best" Iren said with so much excitement. They were on the plane for twenty-four hours straight! They were on the plane for 24 hours straight! When they got to Hawaii they all choses their rooms... "I want this one!!" Iren screamed, "No that's MINE!" They all said, they all were yelling at each other. "Hey guys, relax, you're not all going to get that room, so I'm going to take it since I did make this trip happen" said Maddie loudly. "Yea we think that's fair" they all said, so the girls got settled in and they got ready to go to the beach! When they got there they all split up, Lauren and Carys went to the bar and victoria went back to the hotel. Maddie and Iren went in the water for 4 hours, until..... "omg its a turtle aww it's so cute" Maddie beamed while taking it out of the water! It was almost 10:00 so they went home with the turtle. "What should we name it maddie?" Iren said " Turbo" Maddie said with an accent. Iren nodded, Victoria, Lauren and Carys are staying at a different hotel so now it's only Maddie and Iren. Maddie made Turbo a cozy, soft bed using pillows and blankets, Iren went to her room and slept and so did Maddie and Turbo. Next morning it was 6:00 and Maddies making breakfast, she made delicious, creamy bacon and eggs. Only for Maddie and Turbo, Iren came down the stairs and she said " Hey thanks for making me breakfast, ummm speaking of breakfast WHERE'S MINE?!?" " you don't get any, i made this for me so you make yours for you." Maddie explained. "Ugh fine i'll make my delicious pizza from the oven" Iren said while she was annoyed. So they had a super fun day then they got back on the plane and went back home. When Maddie got home her mom had all Turbos items that he needed. "Hey thanks mom" Maddie said while giving her mom a hug " no problemo". In Maddie's house there was a pet room for Turbo with all his supplies, Turbo loved it.


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