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Avalon Greene, Little miss Innocent, Little miss Goody two shoesGood grades. Good friends. Good life.Until she meets the Black brothers Hunter and Archer.He came in so I jumped up and grabbed a vase."You, stay away from me," he took a step closer and I threw the vase at him, he ducked and it hit the wall behind him."I'm not going to harm you, put the bowl down," I'd found a bowl on the table."Please let me go," I had tears in my eyes and backed up as Hunter and a brunette girl came into the room, I threw the bowl at them and they all ducked."Okay that's it," The guy went from next to brunette and Hunter to right behind me with his arms around my waist and arms "Calm down.""Please, just let me go," I broke down in tears "Please," I kept thrashing in his arms."Calm down, I promise I won't hurt you, and I'll let you go,"Highest Rank in Science Fiction: #25 21/06/2015Highest Rank in Paranormal: #16 12/08/2015

Book #2 of the Star Series. ✧When fate, or one single lie lands her up in her brother's bestfriend's apartment, Preet Randhawa has no other option but to move in with him, become his roommate behind the four walls.But the photo frame hanging on the wall with their wedding pictures, the marriage certificate lying in a drawer of their wardrobe, the rings in their fingers and their stories on how they got married told otherwise to the world. But did they ever marry each other? Nope.And colliding into him in a foreign country after years was just fate? Maybe, Maybe not?

"Adventure time!"you are BoBoiBoy little sister and your journey begin with your big brother, BoBoiBoy and his friends. [Please read disclaimer before you start]Disclaimer:- This story just for fun and practice to write and continue chapter and parts and make BoBoiBoy fandom happy continue read this content

This book is FREE with paid BONUS chapters!Everyone knows mermaids and vampires can't date. But when a mermaid ends up at a boarding school with a smoking hot vampire for a roommate, will love take a bite? ***** Just before her senior year of high school, mermaid Waverly Fishwater learns she's being transferred to a cross-cultural boarding school for supernaturals. But reckless gods, single-minded werewolves, and virtuous fairies are the least of her troubles! West Marin Heights has vampires, and mermaid blood is their favorite snack. So Waverly has to learn who to trust, and fast -- especially since one of her new roommates is a vampire who's way too hot for her to handle! But just when she's starting to fit in, she discovers a dark plot that could destroy the school and the oceans beyond. If Waverly is to expose the evil scheme and get back to her normal teenage problems--overprotective parents, math homework-avoidance, and maybe, just maybe, getting a boyfriend--she's going to have to accept the help of a ragtag group of classmates. Will her plans be a supernatural catastrophe, or can Waverly rally this eccentric band of heroes to save the day? [[Word Count: 90,000-100,000 words]] Cover designed by Natasha ShaikhThree chapters updated every Wednesday and Saturday starting April 6th!

In a future where humanity has developed an interstellar civilization. On the frontier planet of Rubicon 3, a substance called, "Coral" was discovered that could be used as both an energy source and a data conduit. Coral was hailed as the key to humanity's technological advancement, but instead it caused a cataclysmic event known as the "Fires of Ibis," which engulfed the planet and the surrounding star system in flames and left behind a lethal contaminant. All Coral in existence was thought to have been consumed by the disaster. Fifty years later, however, signs of Coral are once again detected on Rubicon 3. Corporations flock to exploit the planet and control the Coral, heedless of the cost and harm to the inhabitants, and mercenaries follow to profit from the conflict. Augmented human designated "C4-621" who is in servitude to an infamous handler named Walter, and fights as an Armored Core pilot on the promise of earning a new life by taking on mercenary jobs. After illegally landing on Rubicon 3, C4-621 steals the license of a deceased mercenary and assumes their callsign: "Raven."

Labarin wasu mata guda uku mabanbanta asali da kaddara ta hada su a yayin da suka dauki aniyar yiwa talauci gudun fanfalaki. Sai suka fada karuwanci..duniya ta zo musu a tafin hannu har suke zaton tafiyar ta kare. Ku biyo su tsakanin Niger da Nigeria mu ga yadda za ta kaya!Mai tafiya..wani guzuri ka tanada??????

Story by cutegir2002>>>A story about a super active, talkative, passionate , cheerful guy JEON JUNGKOOK and a dull, calm, silent, sorrowful guy KIM TAEHYUNG.Jeon Jungkook is a travel freak, being the brother of the biggest business of South korea helped him be a freak even more. As he didn't have to think about taking over the business owned and created by his father. He happily given the permission to be a youtuber more like a blogger who can roam around the world and explore everything he wants too.While Kim Taehyung, is silent, lonely and cold. No one knows where he is, who his parents are? Taehyung is a mystery for the world. And truth to be told no one is really interested in solving this mystery except Jeon jungkook himself."You are so charming, fascinating, alluring, seductive, so attractive, so beautiful. You are enchanting, I want to be with you.""Charming? Beautiful? I am filled with sorrows and darkness. I am silent and scary. It will be better if you stay away from me!""I am ready to let the darkness swallow me, I am ready to talk to you just listen to me. I am determined to pull you out of your colourless world and fill your life with colours. I ain't giving up on you">>>The story contains:Top Jungkook.Bottom Taehyung.Whipped strong and cheerful top.Powerful silent bottom.Cross dressing.Mpreg.Fluff and lots of fluff.A bit of angst.Humour, drama, romance.Smuts.Horror scenes/ theme.Paranormal activity.Scary scenes.The story won't have.Fuckboy or Playboy top Cheating or betrayal between taekook.FEMBOY CONCEPT.NOTE: Taekook will be each other's first in everything, including kisses, hugs and all other physical relationship.THE STORY IS BASED ON MY IMAGINATION THERE IS NO CONNECTION BETWEEN THE STORIES CHARACTER WITH THE REAL LIFE PEOPLE.PEOPLE WHO ARE UNCOMFORTABLE WITH HORROR CONCERT CAN KINDLY DROP THE STORY BECAUSE UT MAY HARM YOU.

Aaron un niño de 16 años, muy maduro para su edad, creció con padres que lo maltrataban desde que era un niño, pero desde que entro a la preparatoria conoce a una chica que le cambiaria toda su vida