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a 'Xiaolin Showdown' AU in which a girl and a boy are thrust into a dangerous and insanely lethal adventure of a sick little game crafted from the minds of two unknown enemies who have her father and his youngest sister. Kimiko 'Tomye' is just having a normal morning in hers and her roommate, Jermaine Rhynch's, apartment when she suddenly sees an envelope at her doorstep from a mysterious sender. it entails information about the sender, whoever they were, having her father as their hostage. she is also told to find one Mr. Raimundo Pedrosa, whom she finds and meets in a neighborhood known to all New York residents as the slums. needless to say, she's pretty hesitant to trust him. actually, the two of them are both really hesitant to trust one another, even after she tells him that whoever has her father also has his youngest sister. turns out he's a former Interpol agent who resigned from the force out of guilt of what he'd done to his best friend on the force, and her real last name is not 'Tomye', but 'Tohomiko', and she's the daughter of (one of) the richest CEOs from the entire continent of Asia as well as the heir to the company.they still need to find a way to save Kimiko's father and Raimundo's youngest sister. only problem with their need to save their loved ones is that they can't seem to trust one another enough to team up, what with all the secrets that the two of them both keep from one another. will they find a way to trust one another in the long run of the dangerous game with which they're being forced by their unknown enemy to play along? how would their friends react to their joint situation should they find out about it? and most importantly of all, just who is the unknown enemy holding Kimiko's father and Raimundo's kid sister for ransom?
Ely•sia•n~ Adjective~ Beautifully or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect♕ ♕ Looking for graphics?? You are at the right place, we provide graphic services, but just a little warning be prepared to have your mind blown with too many crazy options... because you have ten designers with different styles of graphics to choose from.WHY US?♕more man power = more quick and efficient services♕options = variety♕multiple designers = a shop that never shuts♕Other than that we have designers who specialize in vectors and manips, have a creative head for simplistic and aesthetic graphics and other varieties as well. So its basically everything under one roof, rest you will have to see for yourself.What are you still doing here, go ahead open the book and be prepared to have your mind blown away...
What happens when the Gaster Gang handle a human child situation? Read and find out! Based from Bun-bunmuse art story. ps. the reader is 5 year old girl ?
Aphmau and Aaron come acrossed many troubles throughout high school and it turns into a love story between them.......
Kageyama is a devil sent to earth with an assignment, 'Learn about humans'. The humans all seem weird to him, until he meets a human who took his breath away with his jumping skills. Hinata almost looked like he could fly. Who is this Hinata boy? And what happens when they start training together on weekends? Can Kageyama keep his true identity a secret?
Amelia Rosalie Smith is the youngest daughter of Alice Cooper. Her father's identity is unknown. Amelia mysteriously disappeared from her small hometown of Riverdale one day when she was just 5 years old. Nearly everyone in the town believes that she is mostly likely dead at this point.Everyone that is except for her mother and her 2 older half sisters Betty and Polly. Despite it being almost 10 years since Amelia first mysteriously vanished without a single trace, the three blonde haired females have never given up hope.They just know that Amelia is still out there somewhere and that she's still alive. How will Alice, Betty, Polly and everyone else in Riverdale react when they realize that Amelia is in fact still alive and that someone very close to Alice, Betty and Polly is responsible for her disappearance all those years ago?**RƐAƊ ƬO ƑIƝƊ OUƬ!!**
Daynell Leanthorodon 6th in line for the throne of the Ectranmos Throne,had finally done it, He was able to figure out reality shifting ( or whatever the heck the word is) and get awa from his living hell. Sure it took a ridiculous amount of money which was probably inflated past legal standards, but he had done it. Unfortunately Daniel Leon, his counterpart was roped into this and was swapped bodies with Daynell! Now Daniel has to figure out what to do in the stupid story book world and to find a fuck to give. Especially since this Daynell was an A-grade outcast, Victim, and minor villian in his world. What The Hell did he do to deserve ... THIS!