heart breaking moment

She screamed "putron"


And started running towards their tent. Pandavas started running behind her as they also felt something as draupadi is feeling.


Her heart was unconscious. She put long steps to reach her childrens tent.
Finally she entered the tent.


She saw the world's worst sight from her eyes. All her sons we're killed and blood was flowing from their wound. She took small steps as she couldn't imagine that her sons are been killed. She went towards her first child PRATIVINDHYA.


She went touched his wound. Her hand was covered with his blood.


She screamed loudly "prativindhya....."


All pandavas entered the tent. They looked at their sons. Who were been killed by the devil ashwathama. Then they looked at draupadi who was crying very badly. They all went near her.


Draupadi:- aarya tell them to get up aarya. They told and they have promised us that they will not leave us. Aarya tell them please.


She hugged yudhishthir and started crying.


They couldn't speak anything as they were not in the state of consoling her.


Draupadi:- putron please get up.


She went towards her sons. She screamed and cried but all in vain.


Draupadi's ( POV )


Putron please wake up. I can't leave without you all my sons. You are my soul. You can't take my soul away from me putron ........
I beg you please wake up prativindhya...... Satanika...... Sutsoma...... Shrutsena........ Shrutkarma please wake up not for anyone but only for your parents please wake up.


Prativindhya you know right when you would make faces while having your food and you would run here and there so I would start running behind you in case you fall so I could save you. But now your mata is broken putr please prativindhya get up my son please.


Satanika you know right you are the most handsome upapandav. I will find you the most beautiful rajkumari for you putr as I promised you but now you are only breaking the promise which you gave to your mata putr. You can't do this with your mata please get up.


Sutsoma you know I have made so many laddoos for you. Who will eat that laddoos of you are not there with me. I want to feed you with my hands putr please don't leave me. Putr sutsoma please get up.


Shrutsena you know you are the most lovable son right. You can't leave me like this. Please putr you are intelligent as your father. Who will help your brothers to lead the throne my putr. They will need your knowledge my son please get up.


Shrutkarma you are the most youngest upapandav. I know I hadn't spent or give you warmth of mothers love but now I am ready to give love of mother to all my sons. Please get up shrutkarma please get up.


She looked at pandavas who were too crying listening to her.


Draupadi:- aarya tell your sons to get up they all are not listening to me but I know they all will listen to you.


Yudhishthir's ( POV )


I entered the tent. I saw my prativindhya my first son and his brothers lying on the bed wounded. I saw draupadi crying. I felt bad for her. She asked us to wake them up but that was not possible so I went and hugged her tightly. As I know now we can't console her. She started to talk with her son's. Listening to her tears rolled down from my cheeks. I went near prativindhya. I cupped his face and started crying. I can't digest the news that my first son who made me realize what's the role of a father  is now dead. No no he is here he can't go anywhere leaving me and my panchali like this. Please prativindhya get up my son. You are my heart you can't leave me and your mata like this. Please get up........


Bheem's ( POV )


Putr sutsoma get up my son I screamed holding his hand in mine. I can't see you in this condition my putr. I know I had one son before your birth my ghatotkach. But you are my favorite. You can't leave pitashree and mata. You don't have any rights. Get up my son. You know I have planned so many things for you. Laddoos various types of dishes. If you want to eat than please get up.
There are so many fruits in hastinapur you will miss everything than don't blame me. Please get up my most chubby son. Look at your mata putr not for me but only for her please get up. He kissed his forehead he started crying while touching his wound.


Arjun's ( POV )


Shrutkarma you are youngest son. You can't leave me. I have not given you father's love. If I won't give you complete love than I will curse myself discriminating between my sons. So for that you should get up. You can't leave me. You know when you were in panchali's womb. She was angry on me and said something to me. Do you want to what she said I will tell you. She said "aarya I know you love your other three sons and you will not love my son." But than I promised your mata that I will never discriminate between my sons. I will love my youngest son as I loved my other three sons. But now I realized that what panchali told is right. I never gave you love of a father. I am sorry putr. Please for me and your mata please get up.........


Nakul's ( POV )


Satanika my putr please get up. You are my first ever child. You turned me to a best father. You can't leave me and go. I love you the most and I must say you are the more handsome than me. Satanika get up look your pitashree is crying. You promised that you will not make your pitashree cry and you are only making your pitashree. You know when panchali gave birth to you and when she placed you for the first time in my arms. I had tears in my eyes but that tears were of happiness but now I have tears in my eyes because you are leaving us forever. You can't do this with pitashree and mata. You are the gem of my life satanika. Get up and that's an order. Please get up satanika please get up my son...........


Sahdev's  ( POV )


Shrutsena my son listen to me get up. You know sahdev loves shrutsena the most. After panchali you are the won I loved the most. You can't go leaving your pitashree and mata. Get up please. You know your pitashree gives you whatever you want but now your pitashree is asking one thing from you and that is just get up from this bed. See your mata is crying you promised her you will not leave her. Please get up fast please. You know when we were in the forest. We should think of you and gain strength as we know after that we have to live a peaceful life with our sons. But now you and your brothers can't leave us. Please get up my son please get up........


They looked at draupadi who was sitting on the ground and had silent tears. They all went near her as they know she must be more broken than pandavas because she gave them birth and protected them 9 months in her womb.


They wiped her tears which were flowing continuously from her eyes.


Krishna entered the tent and looked at upapandavas a tear flowed from his eye. Then he looked at pandavas and his sakhi. His heart ached looking at his sakhi. Pandavas looked at Krishna as they all went near  Krishna as they know he can only console her.


Draupadi looked at Krishna. She hugged him started sobing loudly.


Draupadi:- govind you are the mightiest. You can do everything which is impossible. Please wake up my sons. See they are sleeping when they know that their parents are craving to see their face.


Krishna:- sakhi I can understand your feelings but you have to accept this truth my dear. I know you loved your sons a lot but no one can help when their death is destined my dear. Don't cry this not the time to sit and cry. This is the time to give punishment to the devil who made you see this worst sight.


Arjun:- yes panchali we all promise we all will kill that ashwathama and then only we will do the last rituals of our sons but not before his death.


"Yes panchali we all promise you" other four said in chorus.


Pandavas went to search ashwathama. Krishna went behind them. 


Kunti entered the tent.
She looked at draupadi and then her grand chidrens who were lying on the bed wounded.


She went and hugged draupadi as she could feel her feelings.


She hugged kunti tightly and started sobbing.


Draupadi:- mata.......


Kunti:- I know putri. I can feel what is your heart is feeling right now. But we have to accept it. We can't change the destiny. I think my grand childrens are destined to leave only till this day.


Listening to her she again started crying.


On the other side


Pandavas caught ashwathama. They took her near draupadi. Because only she had the rights to punish him.


Arjun:- draupadi give this devil punishment who snatched all the colors from your life.


Draupadi:- no aarya it's ok leave him


Bheem:- but draupadi I can't leave him like this.


Ashwathama:- all upapandavas are dead wow. Pandavas all sons are dead.


He started laughing as pandavas were very angry now.


Nakul:- ohh hello we have our heir and it is protected in uttara's womb.


He planned to kill uttara's unborn child.


Ashwathama used his bhramhastra  and commanded him to kill the unborn child of uttara.


All pandavas, draupadi as well as Krishna were angry. Krishna lost his patience and cursed ashwathama that he will never die untill kalyug ends. He will beg for his death but he will never get his death. He took his sudarshan chakra and destroyed his gem which was on his forehead. He laid on the ground unconscious.


Pandavas and draupadi had tears in their eyes as they can't see their sons drapped in white blanket.


Draupadi went towards her sons. She caressed their hairs and kissed them on their forehead one by one. Pandavas finally burnt their sons dead body.


Panchali loudly screamed "putron"


Pandavas went and hugged her as they all started crying in her embrace.





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